WINOL WEEK 5 DEBRIEF:
Reading suggestion from Chris : On bureaucracy – Max Vaber
Opening shots – too many views of campus, get different/alternative shots
Don’t use the word alleged old fashioned and opens you to being sued, the word vandalism is LIBEL, had to be removed.
The Council Statement – punctuality – council IS not are, always correct grammar unless you’re intentionally showing them up
Park and ride story – good expo – use of the word “claimed” is strong. Interviews good, but try to get more damning quotes.
Officers in schools – slightly biased piece, rule on identifying people,
Email story – classically written introduction, who what where when why,
Sport -
Bulletin overall was okay, not on time, takes a hit on traffic which is not good. Content and detail was strong, presentation was good and only a few technical glitches.
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