Road Closure: Good, strong images, something happening, good shots of the bridge
Maps looked very professional, lined up the interview with bursar well,
Didn’t lower the sound on a cut-away, lost a sentence. Out line was a bit
Strange, never use ‘Remains to be seen’.
OOV: Libel to show the man, positive identification. Run it longer or leave it out
Completely, it is not factual that he is a thief
Union: Voice over and scripting was very good, no comment and all factual.
Trying to frame to fit in a poster.
Mice: Good piece, no shots of signs allowed! ‘But at what cost?’ No suspense.
Introduced Councillor with the statement was poor, use a tag line.
Tree was coming out of Claire’s head.
Slob: Brian did not understand it, wasn’t very well explained. Not relevant to
Winchester. Liked the PTC at the start, good moving shot worked very well.
SPORT
Carry cheers underneath a picture edit, run it longer, and then fade it down.
Good presentation from James.
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